You’ve taken yourself, the cauldron
You’ve poured in spine of stress
Spleen of doubt, eye of suspicion
And let it simmer
And simmer
And simmer
.
You’ve cut out the tongue of communication
Dripped in dragons loneliness
Ground to a pulp tenderness
And let it simmer
And simmer
And simmer.
.
You’ve taken yourself, the cauldron
Carefully added bitter words
Twisted memories and spite
And let it simmer
And simmer
And simmer.
.
Mind you, I was the Witch that stirred the spoon.
.
This poem is copywritten and was read at Write Out Loud Aug 2009
I like the repetition of:
‘You’ve taken yourself, the cauldron’ as well as the ‘simmer’
OOOOOO! Love the beautiful hint of spiteful revenge! Very clever!
Keep stirring!
I truly love this poem!
The repetition.. Such strength and power!
Awesome!
Thank you for this kind comment!
Fantastic! I love the repetition in this one.
I like the simmering thoughts.
glaring nightmare
This was awesome !
Loved the way it ended and also the way it simmers, simmers ,simmers 🙂
All these great comments keep me really motivated!